Beneath the Sky, draft 2.1

I just finished off the edits to Beneath the Sky, bringing it up to draft 2.1.  Many thanks to my alpha/beta readers (Andrew, Julia, and Rose) for their feedback on the earlier drafts.

I still have to do another copy-edit pass on it (draft 2.11) before I can really declare it finished.  And then I’ll have to figure out what to do with it, but that’s a whole other topic.